All Comments on 'to watch a day die'

A wonderful thought provoking message Art...I know the story behind the work and that makes it stronger for me. We rush thru life too fast and forget that life can be gone with a whisper... great job! loved this:

I bumped into a Praying Mantis

and we shared a moment of silence,

then I walked away.

Love the animal connections..and the visuals..

thank you for the journey!

Du~

wonderful! Introspective and reflective. This is the best!

Syn

"In order for me to be alive

a day must die"

the whole poem slammed into me. thank you

Great reflection upon the time one must take to open their eyes to see what's around them, because life is filled with fleeting moments. Well done!

I squeeze the breath out of each day as if it were Life's orange juice. In this piece, you have expressed a very powerful thought about something we are powerless to control - when the day comes that outlives us. This is excellent food for thought poetry!

Vixxx

....with a nice feel to it. it certainly makes one think about the passing of time. this is my favorite part:

Now I grab the day

by the neck and twist

the life out of it.

*****

Your work is wonderfully written, whether erotic or not. I enjoy reading them immensely.

You brought that out immediately. Thank you for allowing your words to stir one's mind. Of how to live..

~L