All Comments on 'watching flowers on the wall'

oh man!!!

I allready submitted this poem!!!

arrrgggghhh!!!

let this be a lesson to all y'all - LABEL your stuff after you submit...dang.

well, if you're curious... you can check out "my heart in my hand" and see how I edit. I actually jump between editing ruthlessly and then shooting from the hip...

in this case I think I made "heart in hands'" mediocre bits a bit more polished... eh?