All Comments on 'What??'

been reading Basho at night under the covers haven't you?

I like this alot.

Nice work

I'm sure Senna would appreciate the elegant simplicity here.

Not a word wasted. A concise piece that elegantly draws you in. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

What??...an abundance of horseshit...in very few words. Must be why I liked it.

I have read Basho, I read Senna Jawa, he is very important to read, to study, this really is the first three lines of a Chinese form poem I was working on, the next word was "light", but putting that in would have taken the "ass" meaning out. Yes it is concise and yes it is horseshit. Object - a little fun. With Senna, and with multiple meanings.

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