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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
A many-layered poem

is a thing of beauty. It was worth the read for this line alone:

"An Iron bound blood let taste of irony"

is like a prism, reflecting shades of meaning.

You're good.

~ Angeline

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This poem bleeds..

And there's so much beauty in tragedy. I know these moments, these thoughts, will probably haunt you for the rest of your life. I wish you could just pull these kinds of emotions up when you need the words for something profound - instead of living them.

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