by Christie052780
What is going to happen if you and Kevin want to have a sibling or two or three or four, etc., etc., for this first baby?
...as this was a story that demanded to be left in the imagination after the first episode...Your readers' brains would have been better to make their own conclusions.
P.G.
After the rape and it was rape she should have gone and got the morning after pill and explain to her sister that she did not want a baby from a rape. it was not out of love. he went too far.
Story crashed and burned after he raped her and then the unfinished story. 3/5