All Comments on 'A Helping Hand'

A bit disappointing. I was waiting for the expected surprise ending, but it didn't come. Maybe we've been spoilt!

The premise and plot are good. I think you should re-write this, develop the story and characters more.

To be honest . . . it was over in a flash and therefore not very erotic and very anti-climatic.

Well I liked it.

Rachel

I wish you would expand on your stories a little. Seems like they all end just as it was getting good.

Some might say it is rape but rapists don't usually see to it that their victim has a climax, nor do they tell her they are going tomzke love to her. There should be a other chapter.

You have great premise for all of your stories which are very inviting. But all of the ones I have read lack one vital ingredient: passion! I get the feeling that you are so proud of your matter-of-fact approach. For this reason I stay away from your stories.

The personality of the "helping hand" was so full of himself, but yet inviting. The story made me smile actually. I found humor in it. I would love to read more about these guys.

Nothing more irresistible than temptation.

Thank you, a great little story.

Bahahahahaha!

You're crazy Dude!

Shot.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

but hot. love your stuff.

I like the NC aspect of this one, kind of bending the thoughts of what is consent. She protests verbally, but enjoys the physical sensations. Is she encouraging or objecting? Ah the lovely dilemma.

Love all your stories, Ashson! This one was great also!

You need to learn to write more than 1 page to the story to complete it, it's not fair to your readers, all it does is give you a reputation as a writer who CAN'T FINISH STORIES, that's bad writing.