All Comments on 'A Job You Wouldn't Believe'

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CoptionalCoptionalabout 13 years ago

Not sure I would have classed this Exhibition and Voyeur, but still a good read, keep it up!

Pirate TregarePirate Tregareabout 13 years ago
different!

I only gave it 4, not 5, not sure why; maybe because not enough erotica in it? But the premise itself was a fresh twist on a common theme, and I liked the "Tootsie" conclusion to his departure. Well done!

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 13 years ago
What an imagination!

Well, you're right about one thing! This is hard to believe....but... I liked it! Humiliation when you are the only one to know...nice. Becoming one of the girls...nice! Letting them "use" you...nice! Being "converted" and coming full circle...a nice way to put an end to this story...unless ....maybe there will be lingerie parties at home in the near future? Maybe...it could happen! Oh...don't let the assholes get you down. They probably can't get it up any more!

FictionpaintballFictionpaintballabout 13 years ago
Super Hot

I LOVED this story, it was different from so many other stories you see on here...I can't wait to read more...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very creative

This was a top flight story in terms of creativity. Also, the pace of the story was great and very descriptive.

cpanlpcpanlpover 12 years ago

A cool story! I was surprised the workers did not have him in lingerie. The gay scene was cool especially when the women used the dildos on his ass

Lucky guy! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What a great idea! A little on the "unbelievable" side alright but more believable than most of the stories on here. Absolutely loved the blow job scene to cover the lie! A perfect "one and done" story! Don't fuck it up by having a sequal.

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