All Comments on 'A Lucky Motherfucker'

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justincbenedictjustincbenedictalmost 6 years ago
It's wonderful but

Aren't you going to do a follow up to the "Hannah the evil boss" story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Let David have his mom

David needs to be the one to take control of her and make her pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

It was a good story before it got racist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ronda Rousey follow up!!

Please can you do a ronda rousey follow up story PLEASE!!

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
A LOT OF HATE STORED IN A DISRESPECTFUL PERSON

family or not a Spade by any other name is still a piece of shit, TK U MLJ LV NV

TheRiseFromAshesTheRiseFromAshesabout 3 years ago

Wow, this story took so long to set up, but then the sex was so rushed at the end. We don't even get a follow up at all. I'm really surprised people rated this higher than a 2, given how there's no followup chapters.

lawyerwifelawyerwifeover 2 years ago

the end was worth it

eatsheraftereatsherafter12 months ago

I’m not really into incest type stories, but this angle was good. I’d have preferred that she was married and that her husband had to suffer with the knowledge that his wife was a slut for their sons bully and some how got excited with knowing his wife was being fucked, videoed and made to fuck the bully and friends as well as her videos being posted on the internet. He felt humiliated seeing out the web sites he posted her on so he could get off on them.

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