by Jimyfoxx
The sex was awesome but I wouldn't trust that sociopath girl for anything in the world. Nothing good would come out of that relationship. Five stars and a favorite point!
Wow! This is seriously HOT!! Fantastic sex, and both of these women are seriously deranged. But it's only a story
right?...RIGHT??....lol....5 Stars!! I hope for a sequel. Mom needs to be trained properly!!!
Wow. Very sexy. Had me hatd all the way. Only one thing better - to be in the room with them, joining in and fucking both the women. It deserves more than 5 stars.
Load of rubbish, author didn't even finish grade 6 math, she was 16/17 when he was born and she was married, quit reading when the blackmail started.
Incredibly hot and erotic story.
I do hope the Lisa character gets what's coming to her.
That's about the only thing that upsets me, that she was the one in control at the end.
i suggest removing the measurements. it's a great way to kill interest from all those that don't share your same ideal measurements, both higher and lower. And while measurements are technically descriptive, they're not literally descriptive. Your preceding sentences were effective enough that you don't need them. Why not add her weight and her shoe size? Because all of those things say more about you than the character.
The story was good until the spineless son betrays his mom for the girl that only took advantage of him all this time. His mom was the only one who cared for him, she deserved better.