by shygeek
Excellent story! Can't wait for part 2. Hans and Elsa still need attention as well as any other neighbors
This was the most enjoyable story I have seen in a long time. Very sensual and I couldn't stop until the end. It ticks all the boxes.
Good work.
Sounds like more to come, I want to read about the families coming to the hillside and further adventures with they folks they met so far.
I normally don't like long stories, but after reading the first two pages couldn't stop.
Hope to read about when their families come to visit. Please don't make us wait to long>
Wonderful descriptions of setting, mood, emotions, and increasingly erotic activities; and all in English. I have a very strong image of the blossoming Mia and her divine little breasts in my mind that I doubt will leave me for a long time.
I'm not normally a fan of sequels, but this storyline has so many possible development opportunities in so many potential directions that you could produce episode after episode without it ever getting stale.
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I liked the build up of the story, but the addition of Pascal turned me off a bit. Maybe if there’s a sequel, you could find him a nice girl of his own.
You need a proof reader too, as in pp 9 & 10 you’ve got Sophie taking Susie’s place.
4 stars. Don’t stop now.
I want to know about the house, future parties, Ah Natural resort. I wouldn't give up the cow for free milk just yet. Mia all guys are virgins if she were to ask. Teach me
Can't wait for the next chapter! Love the way you told the story and how things progressed. Great how Mia embraced the nudist lifestyle and how it grew. Is Liam going to go smooth? Will they stay nude while the building is going on? Hope chapter 2 is soon!
It was a very well written, very sexy story. Of course it's over the top but that is what this site is for. It was so well written and the characters so good that i found myself believing in them and nearly wanting to be them. Well done x
I enjoyed the story a lot.....despite a bit too exaggerated at times and a few errors. A little proof reading/editing would have helped. A.F.C. Somerset
great story, feels familiar to me, I have the same taste and almost the same experience. Hope to read a next part in this story nd please go a step further in the subject of pee interest.
Read this twice since written. Nice story and good description of scenery and just enough on the action. The plot shows real creativity and some reality.
Enjoyable read. Well done.