All Comments on 'A New Place'

by whiskey011

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wolf9696wolf9696over 10 years ago

good start.....loved it that she tops when she gets excited.....will wait for more....:)

WhiskeyIsGoodWhiskeyIsGoodover 10 years ago
That was great

Kind of disappointed that it ended so soon though lol can't wait for chapter 2. Really excited to see what happens next.

deanahiideanahiiover 10 years ago
more

yes can't wait for the 2nd installment. need to go somewhere with it. good beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good starte

but iam looking forward to more very soon I just love shemal romance yours leann mawh

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 10 years ago
Wait... what?

I loved this little story-starter you have here. The trouble is, you got things all set up, but didn't take the story where we all want to see it go.

Please take your time about it, though. This is a lovely little intro, and it deserves whatever time it takes you to get Chapter 02 together. Do keep after it, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You need an editor

to fix your grammar and sentence structure errors.

Royston_69Royston_6911 months ago

Where's the rest?

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