All Comments on 'A Show For Him'

Just a beutiful loving story.. That very lucky bill.

Beautifully written, lovingly expressed. This was so obviously written by a woman, a woman able to express the love she felt for a man (or the love buried deeply inside of her longing to be expressed). Kudos to the author for a lovely tale.

Beautiful story, I really enjoyed it.

Just shows we never lose the love and passion even if there aren't too many heroes like Bill around.

Congrats.

It was a wonderful story and I loved it. M

what a great story thanks

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Well written and so smooth! I wish my wife was like this one, and we have been married for 43 years........

It is a great pleasure to read of a real loving couple situation. With so much crap on this site attempting to be erotic with stories of betrayal and worse, it is fantastic to come across a gem of a story. Thank you.

Well written, and quite delicious.

Such a pleasure to read. The way the authour led us on, made the reader think one thing and then pulling a nice surprise out of her hat was a lot of fun.

Well done.

Superbly written loving wife tale that reminds us that marriage can be quite erotic. Thank you.

Loved it! Nice to read a romantic twist to a story. I still like a hot & steamy threesome or foursome, but this was nice, keep up the excellent writing.

Absolutely charming and heartwarming.

My friend Ed had read this and suggested it to me...what a pal! This is such a beautiful story with a sappy but romantic end...for now anyway! Write on sister, write on!!

How did this gem of a story stay hidden from me for so long? The characters are wonderfully drawn and the writing is so ellegant and smooth. And the eroticism is heart-stopping beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely tail with us all.

I came across this story quite by accident and so was truly pleased. This is a wonderful story; it has very good flow and weaves the tale with a feel of genuine feeling. Well done!

What I love about your writing is that your women have an inner strength and peace. You portray a world that is innately kind even in the ravages of war, where love prospers and romance can walk hand in hand with eroticism and self-discovery. You have a new fan, and I loved the ending.

What happened next between Bill and his wife?