by asimplekink
It's hard to believe no one has commented by this point. You write wonderfully! The story characters are fully plausible and as "real" as can be, thanks to your character and story development. Unlike the majority of stories I've read here, yours has a plot and you seem to know just how to round off a chapter exactly where it is most advantageous to do so! I've moved from chapter to chapter each time with keen interest, not because of the category the story falls in but because you've created a wonderful escape, as if I've taken a vacation & am full of curiosity & delight to explore & take in everything! Thank you for sharing your work. You'll be added to my favorite authors list at the end of the story!
This was really well written. Characterisation was great. Very erotic. Well done.
As an avid reader of mother/son incestuous love stories, this story has developed into a beautiful story. The chacters are being developed indepth. The plot is logical. The use of the English language speaks well of their writing ability. As someone in real life that has no problem with mutually consenual incest, without positional coercion, actual or implies emotional or physical abandonment and/or abuse, I believe this story truely reflects how such a relationship would begin and continue. This a 5 star series.