All Comments on 'A Tale of Revenge Ch. 05-07'

It had been longer, but you finished it neatly. Felt a tad rushed, but otherwise was well written. Love your work, even if I feel it ended too soon.

you did it again you wrote another great story more please

And it felt like you ran out of words at the end.

Boy, it's brutal to be a Lit writer. First readers complain that the stories never get finished then turn right around to whine the ending was too rushed. Jeepers, people, try expressing some appreciation before jumping into your complaints, ok?

The way you let the vampires creep into her mind was awesome, ratcheted up the suspense nicely!

You're very skilled with English in general, and the way you write really paints a picture. I love reading your stuff. Can't wait for more.

I really love reading your stories. I know it can take a while to put out chapters because you want everything worded to flow perfectly and mold together. I haven't written anything in years but I was the same way with poetry. The end result is always so worth the wait. :) Keep up the amazing work.

Oh and to t’other Anon, the words are supposed to run out at the end. That’s why it’s called the end 😉

Another 5 stars

Tess (UK)

Another good one I think I will keep reading.

This was a very good story... closer to what we humans believe vampires to be than any thing I've read here on literotica. Doesn't mean I don't like the other types of stories, because I do. Well done!