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The end of Part One of Two
Of
A TALE OF TWO LOVES
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Continued in Part Two - A LITTLE RAIN MUST FALL
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexanabout 1 year agoWhile I'm big on protecting women from obnoxious beasts, in my 63 years of life it's never gotten so bad that it led to fisticuffs. Your fight scenes and macho bullshit were distracting from an otherwise very good story. Matt apparently has a chip on his shoulder, using brawn to push his way through instead of brains and finesse.
One thing that was most excellent is how he's modest with his spending. He doesn't have a mansion, just a comfortable but modest home. The corvette is over the top, but he's otherwise sensible with his money.
I'm interested in seeing where you're heading with this. I'm hoping that he ends up with both girls and they become good friends sharing Matt between them. It's going to devastate one of them if he is forced to choose. 4/5
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWow, I can't hardly imagine how this is going to work out without someone getting hurt badly. Truly great start!! Don't know how anyone can choose between these two. Ok, on to part two!
