All Comments on 'A Train Trip'

I love your wit and some of your stories are among my favorites. Sorry, that I'm not that much enamored of spanking but most of your other stories are quite enjoyable to read. Even those with the spanking are usually enjoyable but I often skip over such sections.

Whilst the story is very decriptive it is clearly written by the male of our species. I have not as yet come across any female who on her debut as had an orgasm in fact far from it the body is way to tense to cum. Why oh why when reading about being deflowered by men does it include a female orgasm and more so by penetration?

You need to continue this later that night and the next morning!

A shame you leave most of your stories unfinished, leading towards another scene, but then never delivering it.

If you aren't then intending a second chapter, then please stop with the sequel bait.

Please just write what you promised, as we all know he was going to have a good crack at deflowering all of them that night and you even indicated there would be sequel so please deliver .We all know you are capable of easily and quickly finishing this adventure of four young virgins and a canny old goat and let a good time be had by All .It’s not as if it takes you along time to produce a story as you have written more than most people would be able to produce in 10 careers / lifetime and a thousand times more stories than some I don’t think there is anyone on here with as many stories as you most writers on here have less than a hundred stories you have over 14 hundred stories so please just sit down and produce another masterpiece and make us All happy Please

Oh, that you had proofread this before posting.