All Comments on 'A Wet, Wild Summer'

Hope there is more and i hope it will be something that will be lasting between the 2.

Thanks for giving Mike some chest hair -- on a twenty-year old guy, that's very sexy, and Kelly seems to enjoy everything about her "big" brother!

this was way to rushed from the time she got home to the time she undressed for him should be spread over months not less than an hour. delete and do a rewrite makeing it longer, slower and more realistic.

I didnt have a problem with his sister getting right to the point. Shes home, she has him alone in the house. What annoys me is the brother is basically a douche. Written in being afraid of this and that, like a thirteen year old, when he had no reason to be afraid of anything. He's a big boy but never went to talk to his sister about things like a man. Then when shes telling him how she feels he's still acting like a douche towards her! Hell, if you replaced him with a real guy then the story would be perfect!

I think the story has not ended as the lady has not been deflowed besides they've got all summer

I thought she was going to say she was wearing the same red panties from last year,

Ho hummm. Wake me if chapter 2 isn't as boring.

Wish the big brother was as brave as lil' sis, but I'm willing to read on!