All Comments on 'About That Night'

by Smuttyandfun

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u7 months ago

Wonderful story, well done

BlueFox007BlueFox0077 months ago

Wow! An actual love story.

Thank you. 5*

This gets shared with the wife.

brian_scoobybrian_scooby7 months ago

Yes… a great romantic love story… very enjoyable! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wonderfully light, racy, romantic Halloween story. I very much enjoyed it! I enjoy much of your writing.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit246017 months ago

This has all the earmarks of a Hallmark film - sans hot sex, of course. Loved Alexa’s narrative voice. A bit too sentimental for my tastes, but very well written.

muskyboymuskyboy7 months ago

Wow, 5/5! This should be in Romance for sure! Lovely story and very well told! Thanks for this!

photokenphotoken7 months ago

Great romantic story!! Thank you Photoken

NEOLSwedeNEOLSwede7 months ago

Really nice love story! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent work! Love the storyline and the sex was super hot.

JimDiamondJimDiamond7 months ago

AHHH, that was really a sweet romance...

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy7 months ago

Very enjoyable romantic story!

5

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfire7 months ago

Lovely tale, S&F, and a sweet ride. The outfit sounded quite sexy and I liked the surprise near the end. However, I was gladdest that the house really had been in Sebastian’s family for the 100 years (and NOT Dracula’s as I immediately suspected when he said that!). Thanks for another great story and best wishes in the contest.

ThatNewGuyThatNewGuy7 months ago

A lovely romance. And I enjoyed your choice of song. "At Last" is a classic. Well done!

PickFictionPickFiction7 months ago

Great romance, and well-told, as always. Good job, and good luck in the contest.

oldsage_1oldsage_17 months ago

Holy Smokes! Great romance story! I'm sure Fun had a lot to do with this one! 😉

Cheers

SAGE

Crusader235Crusader2357 months ago

Just a nice romantic story with a happy ending. Worthy of the five stars I gave it. Thank you for it.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

At the end of crappy day at work, we all need a 'happy ending'! Nice!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun7 months agoAuthor

I'm glad to see so many of you enjoyed this fun little Halloween tale. And thank you for all your kind comments.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This is an authentic romantic story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Sweetness! Thank you!

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