All Comments on 'Accidental Show'

Good story, well told, well spelled. Could be slightly more erotic, but doesn't need to be; we don't all need pictures.

I liked the punctuation. A purist wouldn't approve, but I thought it was written the way the hero would talk.

A further suggestion: I bet I won't be the only reader who is hoping for a sequel, to read what the lady thinks of this story, and how she says it.

More, please.

One question. Are you magma-man or mag-maman?

Aurelian

A lot of fun even plausible if highly unlikely -

Superbly told , would have been

GREAT if it was longer.

Thank you for sharing this,

ZL00py.

I had real difficulty empathizing with your protagonist. His background and situation weren't too difficult to get my head around, but his reaction to female attention was. If he really wasn't interested or was really uncomfortable with it, it seemed impossible to me that he couldn't drive them away. Tell them he was gay, tell them he wasn't interested in cheap sluts, not respond to them at all...

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