All Comments on 'Addicted Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hey now

wonderful as always. I just gotta say though when Kiran was talkin bout the multiple birth thing, that had me squirming something fierce. I would have ran away BIG time. lol

mechmanasmechmanasabout 15 years ago
Great

I can't wait for the next chapter hurry up lol

bellanoirbellanoirabout 15 years ago
So good!

When reading this I found myself wishing these men really existed. Like where can I get one! Any way great addition ready to see where you take the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hmmm..

My guess is that his mate is one of the babies... or maybe not!

angelicsoundsangelicsoundsabout 15 years agoAuthor
No..

His mate is not one of the babies...that would be a little weird.

mekakymekakyabout 15 years ago
Great

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
luv'd it!!

This was soo great...i literally can't wait to read more!!...lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
luv'd it!!

This was soo great...i literally can't wait to read more!!...lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent!!!

Love the story and can't wait to see who Kyan's mate is. Please don't keep us waiting long and update soon :)

divisionreddivisionredabout 15 years ago
Thanks for a great read

She is having 4 babies at once...yikes. I can't wait for the other twin to find his true mate. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Awww

That was such a gorgeous story. I hope u continue with this series, i cant wait 4 Kyans story, hehe,his mate isnt Jasmines secretary,is it? u r a brilliant author,ur fan, Tani.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Can't wait for next installment!

especially love the werewolf aspect to Kiran's family.

MSNJMSNJabout 15 years ago
YOU GO GURL

This is BEAUTIFUL Non-Human and Interracial I LOVE IT my kind of story. Drop it like its HOTTTTTT and soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
LOved It

Can't wait to hear more. I really want to hear about the births of the babies and the progression of the pregnancy and Kyan's woman. I love the whole pregant vamp thing. Can't wait for more !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GO...

OH PLEASE, HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS... I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE...

theonlinestalkertheonlinestalkerabout 15 years ago
i'm hooked

this has got to be the sexiest vampire story ever written. more please...i need more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Maaaan...

Guess it's time for me to get back to work now... Psssssshhhhhh. Hope you've got a few chapters stocked, cause if the other comments are any indication...

IzzyLoveIzzyLovealmost 15 years ago
Love It

"Possessive now, possessive always...possessive very" I love your stories I've read them all a few times!! Can't wait for your new stuff!!

Heavenly_gurl09Heavenly_gurl09almost 15 years ago
LOVED IT!!

I've read all your stories and cany wait until the next installment of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
WOWZA!!!

that is one steamy story. please continue with Kyan. Its one of the best vampire stories ive read since twilight.

Allsoccer23Allsoccer23over 14 years ago
LOVED IT!

WOW! I have to say I was very surprised with how Candace's story took a twist at the end but I LOVED IT and Jasmine's story! PLEASE keep writing these kinds of stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please write more!!! Don't stop there we need more i love it keep up the good work!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Marvelous!

Keep on writing u doin good! Cant wait for the next chapter .

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
when's kyan story be out?

loved it! but i hope that you won't forget to write about kyan's story. i'll be waiting for it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
im so ADDICTED!!!lol

Okay now im ready to see who kyan mate is!! U have to continue with this story!!! so addicted!!! please continue!!!

nieniernienierover 14 years ago
Definitely Addicted...

I love this story I love your writing you are killing me though. Please update soon. I want to know who Kyan's mate is. Please update update update!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic

I really loved this story, please don't stop here. I want to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Plz finish this story,its been months now

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
I loved it!

hope there is more to come. one talented author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Thanks for a great read.

I love Jasmine and Kody. They are great together. Can't wait to read the sequel to this story. Thanks

EnclosedOneEnclosedOneover 13 years ago

MORE PLEASE!!!

This story is so awesome, had me laughing quite a bit and feeling rather aroused too ~_^

I'm just kinda sad that it's so short.

Kody and Jasmine are such a wonderful couple :D

EnclosedOneEnclosedOneover 13 years ago

I really, really enjoyed this story, made me laugh a lot too. I look forward to reading everything else you've submitted in the future <3

huneybeehuneybeealmost 13 years ago
OK WHERE THE REST

I UNDERSTAND THAT U CALL THIS STOREY ADDICTED N LIKE THE STOREY SAYS I AM HOOKED SO U NEED TO HURRY UP N WRITE AT LEAST 4 MORE CHAPTERS SO GET TO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SashasworldSashasworldover 12 years ago
dude!

finish, tie up the loose strings & the next chapter!!!

drews_lette11drews_lette11over 11 years ago
Kyan's mate

So where's the story for Kyan's mate? I'm dying to know who gets the sexy black sheep.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Keeping my fingers crossed, wishing for the twin brothers story.

lesyeuxnoirslesyeuxnoirsabout 10 years ago
as previously stated

MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
MOAR

Oh for the love of god MOAR.

MyaHunterMyaHunterover 9 years ago
love it!

Just a little hiccup with Candace and Peter. You mentioned they were having twins but now they only have only baby instead of the twins.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
BEST LINE EVER LOL

"See, this is why I'm overly possessive. Why must you tell me when you think my relatives are good looking?"

Celtic_moon28Celtic_moon28over 8 years ago
awesome story

This is one of the best stories that I've read on this site.. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Katatude4LifeKatatude4Lifeover 8 years ago
There won't be anything further from this Author

Last publication was in 2009. All stories unfinished will remain so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What happened?

I wish you would finish the story. I'm anxious to see if Kyan finds his mate.

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyalmost 6 years ago
Please

I am growing so tired of finding a good writer with an interesting story who ends up leaving me and other readers wanting for the continuation and end to something we have invested time in only to be disappointed.

Please finish this story.

If you aren't going to finish a great story, don't bother to start it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Story continues

The authors story picks back up with "Obsession."

_RikkiSaint__RikkiSaint_almost 6 years ago
Uumm Author finished the story back in 2010

Normally I wouldn't comment, but I understand chasingthesky's frustration. However, the story is complete and I would hate for new people coming across it to miss out on the end. The story ordered is 1. The Halloween story (can't remember exact name but it's the only one), 2. Addiction and 3. Obsession. Happy Reading :)

shyspudshyspudover 3 years ago

bloody brilliant!

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