All Comments on 'Adventures of Sarah Ch. 10'

You put this together well. From revenge to public service and a lot of hot sex included. Keep up the writing.

Once again thank you for your submissions. Way to keep the story going.

I thought the sex scenes were hot, esp. the oral sex ones!

You plan to add other men in a history?

One of the best series of stories I've ever read, on this or any other site. I think I love you, Hayli.

The only thing better than her stories is her absolute beauty! (Guys, check out her pic -- she's a babe!)

In the first 15 paragraphs you used Hank as the first word in seven paragraphs. I expect that level of originality in a story written by a 12 year old. It makes the story stilted. The idea for the story is good but the writing detracts.

Hank just P1

Hank got P3

Hank placed P5

Hank took P6

Hank thought P10

"Hank, we're done" P11

Hank drove P15

I loved it!!!

I want a black cock up my ass also!!!

Tony

I haven't read this since you first posted it, and it's a treat to read it again. It's a little raw compared to your later work, but it's a very sexy story, and the way you get inside Sarah's head is fantastic. The best NC stories always involve the NC sex becoming consensual, moving from forbidden to desired to needed, and you accomplish that easily in this wonderful series. Thank you for writing this and all your other stories, I hope you'll continue posting stories.

Awesome story!