All Comments on 'After'

by Scorpio44a

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Another great story from the master

I read everything you write. Some I like better than others. This story is one of your best. Loved it, keep on writing!

lancewmlancewmabout 14 years ago
Excellent story

Exceedingly well wriiten. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Another superb tale

I don't know how you do it. One great story after another. This was one of your very best. I enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent

Very good story. Moves fast and could easily be expanded into a longer series.

denverjohndenverjohnabout 14 years ago
We need more of this fantastic story.

I love this story and the people in it. It feels so real. I would love to see you write more of this story.

morefunnmorefunnabout 14 years ago
BRAVO, BRAVO!!!!!

Wonderful read and Thank You for sharing with us.

Enough Said.

Other than Encore, Encore!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantastic!

There are very few stories I would recommend to my wife and this is one of the. This is proof Erotic and especially BDSM does not have to be crude. It is a gentle yet erotic read. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Your best so far...

I've read this story three times since yesterday. I'm a big fan of your writing, but this is my favorite short story of any type, ever. I think this would be a good one to serialize. Thanks, Scorpio44!!!

don9721don9721about 14 years ago
excellent read. well done!

this piece is really well done. as another comment stated " it could be a fine

series.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 14 years ago
Definately the five stars

Excellent.

I can't think of any more to say

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Beautiful.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for an excellent story.

movermoverabout 14 years ago
GR8

You have put the erotica in lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful Read!

The story was great! Looking forward to more either continuing the story or others! It is nice to read a story from a male prospective that is as sensual and sexy as yours

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
High Quality Story

I read this story several months ago. The story today still causes the reader to think as well as appreciate the gift that is Scorpio44a's storytelling.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 13 years ago
Wonderful

A great story. It gave me goosebumps in the end. Excellent!

formymasterformymasterover 12 years ago
Thank You

Your story taught me a lot about d/s in my relationship. Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.

chattykathy8883chattykathy8883almost 12 years ago
GREAT STORY!!!!!!

FELL IN LOVED WITH THIS STORY & CHARACTERS. CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!

jpl7490jpl7490over 10 years ago
Awesome

What more can I saw, simply awesome, such a wonderful read

KrampusKrampusover 9 years ago

One of the best stories I've read on this site. Keep up the good work

WORDSMITH2015WORDSMITH2015about 8 years ago
A TOTAL WET DREAM/FANTASY A BILLIONAIRE WITH 2 SUBS

That is the stuff dreams are made of. As if!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More than a dream that came true!

Brilliantly written! Loved it because we have so little good news stories! A young man gets MUCH more than he deserves! Given to him by people who love him. A modern day Fairy Tales!

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 6 years ago
Mmmm - A fairy tale?

So well written - BUT - there is more ahead! This would be another great story to complete, but only when it is ready.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WOW - What a Fantasy! ☺

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