by Scorpio44a
I read everything you write. Some I like better than others. This story is one of your best. Loved it, keep on writing!
I don't know how you do it. One great story after another. This was one of your very best. I enjoyed it immensely.
Very good story. Moves fast and could easily be expanded into a longer series.
I love this story and the people in it. It feels so real. I would love to see you write more of this story.
Wonderful read and Thank You for sharing with us.
Enough Said.
Other than Encore, Encore!
There are very few stories I would recommend to my wife and this is one of the. This is proof Erotic and especially BDSM does not have to be crude. It is a gentle yet erotic read. Well done.
I've read this story three times since yesterday. I'm a big fan of your writing, but this is my favorite short story of any type, ever. I think this would be a good one to serialize. Thanks, Scorpio44!!!
this piece is really well done. as another comment stated " it could be a fine
series.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for an excellent story.
The story was great! Looking forward to more either continuing the story or others! It is nice to read a story from a male prospective that is as sensual and sexy as yours
I read this story several months ago. The story today still causes the reader to think as well as appreciate the gift that is Scorpio44a's storytelling.
A great story. It gave me goosebumps in the end. Excellent!
Your story taught me a lot about d/s in my relationship. Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.
FELL IN LOVED WITH THIS STORY & CHARACTERS. CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!
That is the stuff dreams are made of. As if!!!!
Brilliantly written! Loved it because we have so little good news stories! A young man gets MUCH more than he deserves! Given to him by people who love him. A modern day Fairy Tales!
So well written - BUT - there is more ahead! This would be another great story to complete, but only when it is ready.