All Comments on 'Al and Vy Introduction Ch. 01'

The tale is so Stark and Gritty the details become TMI.

Plus the apart-ness that leads her to scheme for her to come back alone, and that has him out alone drunk while she has no backup (thankfully he was raped, not her) is pretty repulsive.

Nasty enough it's too smelly for Even Gonzo Journalism. Thanks for the effort and honesty, brutal though it is.

That one basically sucked.

The first thing that comes to mind, is you driving drunk.