All Comments on 'Alex and Emma Pt. 02'

Your writing is fantastic. I love the way you are building this up. Cant wait for more :)

Nice story so far, good intro, a bit of intrigue, although so far I'm having a hard time imagining a dom that could be that much younger than "you" (presuming like all of us you like to imagine yourself in the starring role). My experience is that the other way around is imaginable; a dom with age and life experience, so i'm finding the idea of a college guy that can be into anything other than himself a bit intriguing. Anxiously waiting for part 3!

I'm losing interest in this story but not enough that I won't read the next chapter. I like the idea that there is some mutuality - that Emma will get to assume the Dom role on occasion. I could never totally dom a woman nor totally submit to be dommed by one. For me, it would just be another game to play - another way to enjoy sex. Sometimes I'll be the fucker and other times the fuckee. Curious as to how this story will move forward. Curious as to how I will react to further chapters. Interesting!

Alex's voice is distinct and hot and lovely; I can really picture this precociously confident and in control college student who is both youthful and calm & in control. And I'm loving Emma, too. Great story!

I love the word play between them . Very natural, and, of course, very sexy. Five!

The expectation is sooo delicious!!

This is breathtakingly realistic, it’s detailed and honest as for me I’m honestly impressed as well as aroused.

Tess (UK)

This is incredibly well written. So looking forward to the promised weekend!

I really love the way this story is written it s been well thought out Alex exudes confidence the way he dominates Emma even just them meeting in the restaurant her wait for him and head her squirming in her seat with hour even being there. This story is going to get very interesting as it goes along. Extremely well gave it a 5out of 5 stars