All Comments on 'Alex and Emma Pt. 05'

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legsfeettoes over 5 years ago

Losing me again.

Not exactly sure why, but this chapter didn't do it for me. Rated it 4 stars. Maybe it should have been 3. It could be me and not you. But, nonetheless, fewer than 5 stars. Will be back for chapter 6 to see if it moves me again.

Daniellaxmjts over 5 years ago

Agree, it doesn’t work

Why oh why does she cry all the time?

Series is good and you know you are a good writer, yet this chapter did not captivate me, sorry...

TANSTAAFL58 over 5 years ago

She cries

Because she thinks herself unworthy of Alex's attention, and because she's overwhelmed by her reaction, her capacity for pleasure and her desire for more and kinkier action. That's what I figure. I gave it five or creativity and arousal.

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