All Comments on 'Alexander and Jennifer: Sunday 01'

This is the longest chapter in the Alexander and Jennifer series, and its length is fully justified to advance the plot properly. The author wisely does not rush through things, but advances the story at a steady pace that is at all times engaging. The love scenes are beautifully written and are never tedious or hinder the plot in any way. One might carp at a few errors of grammar in this chapter, or such expressions as "our lips crashed together" ('crashed' not being a very good adverb for lips coming together), but such quibbles are out of place here. What we have here is an outstanding Romance story, of which there are far too few on this site. Five Stars for this chapter.