All Comments on 'Alley Rendezvous'

That was amazing. I came hard. You did amazing.

amazing. so amazing.

but not five times on every line. You need to re-work your style.

Fuck !! This was soooo HOT !!

It felt like you were talking to my pussy and stroking it so good

And it's all too awesome.

My title makes about as much sense as this writing style. Not rated since I could not read more than the first three clusters of words (l'm guessing you'd call them paragraphs). I rcognize the words themselves as being English language, but they do not convey any coherent thought.

Never seen this style before, very interesting read! Vivid and descriptive tho I will admit a bit redundant in some places ... I liked it and I think should you try again it will definitely get to 'panting' ;) Thank you!