All Comments on 'Aloha Lovers: Interlude'

I have really enjoyed your Aloha series. The only thing that I haven't seen is the contination of the series. It is well written and verrrry erotic. Not only stimulating but also the type of story that allows the imagination to thrive

it was well written. Although I didn't care for the Dom-Sub/BDSM parts of the story, all in all I liked it.

It seemed to me that the last chapter (Interlude) was kind of out if sync with the previous chapters. Perhaps it was meant to be somewhere in the middle of the series instead of at the end.

Keylani isn't a true Hawaiian name, as there is no letter y in their alphabet.

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