All Comments on 'Alpha Killer Ch. 46-50'

Nothing like getting some payback. Looking forward to the next post. Thanks.

You know how to fill a few chapters. I didn't see the removal of the council coming so quickly. Well done.

Okay, so that was a violent chapter. Hmm... sex & violence, must be a were story. Gets a 5 from me.

That ending was quite a surprise! Thank you for another exciting chapter.

I think that we still need another chapter or two. This is a werewolf romance, even if it is dripping a little blood. We need some happy endings, here. Maybe Talia and Randall could go down and clean out that sex slave island, or something. The FBI needs to rack some ass, too. Good one, Partwolf! Go, boy, go!

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I ditto what SensitiveHands said...

The ending was a surprise twist..

This was very unexpected...AND VERY GOOD....LOVE IT!!!!

I don't think this is the end. Someone's secret island playground is in for a little blood-letting. Looking forward to it.

Next five chapters are in the que

Awesome finally some major dicks getting killed good. Not to say the others weren't decks for all that pedophile stuff but those were more of a personal Vendetta this is awesome

This story is badass

This is hard to keep reading for so long. Tons of it could have been cut out to keep focus

I don’t get why talia and Randall want to take off back to work and after the traffickers when they have problems much bigger than humans that can’t pose threat and can wait. It makes no sense at all. Todd is out somewhere they all know the council is not on their side. They know videos of talia’s vampire side are being sent to everyone. So they should know that many will want to kill her. Why in the hell are they focused on humans that can’t and won’t come after them because they don’t know about them. They can be dealt with any time after dealing with wolf problems. I just feel like wolves are not smart at all in your story. They couldn’t put together girl going missing and parents die same day. As soon as truth about Todd was out every wolf in country should have put the council down. So much potential here but it’s falling a little short.

You’ve completely changed the basis of werewolve lore. Time and time again, you’ve said “werewolves don’t shift for the first time until they’re atleast 17” and they only shift before if they’re in danger (like mckayla in catching treasure). If you’re gonna write wolf stuff, atleast keep it consistent, because philip shifting into his wolf at whatever young age he is is completely illogical

Waiting for the other shoe to drop, Todd getting his ending and the sex traffickers taken down. Surprised if we don't see Jeffrey What's his name somewhere in the mix, lol.

Im a little slow. Just caught on to the names. Tara Himan, Jack Meoffe, Justin Heranus. Hysterical