All Comments on 'An Unusual Blackmail'

Like it, nicely done..... 4****

Just the right amount of reluctance, and I hope she dumps that husband and keeps Skye.

Very erotic and exciting to read. It made me wish I was Andrea.

I have various scenario in mind for an epilogue and I always enjoy a story that leaves me with that. Thank you

I can't believe I missed this! Sorry, Randi!

Kind of a moot point given the way things turned out, but I have my usual problems with blackmail. Yes, she did a bad thing. Now the blackmailer, surely not an honorable person, will STILL have the blackmail material, but will now have video of her masturbating, to be used God only know how, and she will be blindfolded and helpless!

"Skye told her brother" - I thought he was her friend?

It was such a pleasure to read this. I was so absorbed in it. Thank you for sharing!

I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

It's good to know that a writer as talented as you occasionally writes a story that needs a rewrite. This one does. Some thumpy rhythm. Logic gaps. But I liked the spirit behind your work.

Daaaym Randyi, you've still got it. Your title tells it all and if anyone disses it just remember this "Fuck them all, fuck them all,

the fat, the skinny and tall."

Great story a 5 on the Literotica scale, and a 4 on "The,Budweiser scale"

Dan

Very, very erotic.

I just love "anonymous" assholes that like to critique other's efforts but put nothing of their own out there to demonstrate their own "greatness". Unless you've put your own writing skills on display for others to judge you've got a lot of gall telling someone they need to rewrite their work.

Hey, Randy - 7% of $16,000,000 is $1,120,000! No way anyone would have dumped that for $25,000

Right after fucking Benji and Skye she says, “What am I going to do, Skye? I'm going to have to go home and that cheating bastard is going to be there.“ At this point she’s not being blackmailed. So Andre? Fuck you. You’ve had, or are having your revenge fucks, which is fine. I believe two “ equal” wrongs CAN make a right (but just not NECESSARILY so). But once you do that, then there is no complaining. So shut the fuck up.

Was a great story, would love to see the story unfold to the end . Will there be another chapter?

I think I've run out of ways to comment on your stories. I loved the story!

I think the kids should have been part of the deal. Not fair to them.

It says in the story that she is bringing the kids.

*****

Enough said.

I really enjoyed the very unexpected twists and turns that this story offered. Nicely done!!!! You could very easily extend this story to include the divorce from shithead husband and add a bit of the future of the newly forming relationship and possible newly formed family unit, but the story does stand by itself as written. Thanks, this story just adds another dimension to your writing skills. I love your stuff!! BTW I am a widowed 73 yr. old and just discovered Lit.com 2 yrs ago. I have definite likes and dislikes on the genre offered and romance is my favorite class but I do extend myself to other genre if it is written by a favorite author. I had a great life with a great lady for 46 yrs. 44 of them married. I am really old school so it gives me a jaded outlook on a great deal of the crap offered on Lit. Your stuff is on a very much higher level in MY opinion and reading your stories gives me satisfaction and energy to get through another day. KUDOS

Seven percent of 14 million is a good bit over a million. Damn good commission. Loving all your stories, all good reads. Getting me through Covid19

Wasn't expecting this type of story under this genre. Thought it could have been longer on the blackmail / submission and could have extended the ending but overall l thought the writing was excellent, again, and loved it.

Hope the dumb dumb finds out that her husband was not cheating. Then her children turn against her.

sexy thanks for an interesting story, missed the confrontation with hubby though.

I,ve always complained that writers never have any imagination, you are out of this world.

A totally different type of story. Well written. Interesting.

Masterful storytelling with a decadent twist. Andrea was a victim of her own doing. She's a bit clueless as to her husband, her sexuality and her love life(or lack thereof). Skye is manipulative and scheming, but very sensual and loving.

This could have been drawn out for more telling, i.e. some back story or sub plots??

If the wife would do those things in bed beforehand, he would be fucking her more often. Although, theres a saying 'For every hot girl you see, there's a guy who's tired of fucking her'. 4/5

Nato

Loved it.

5*

BJ

In the next chapter, we need to see how Skye manipulated the husband and the church secretary into their affair just so she could win Andrea away.

A hot tale! 5 stars. to Annie, 3 years ago who said good story, bad math. maybe you should check your skills. 7% of 14 million is exactly 980k. better luck next time,annie. DMW aka

Great story. 5 stars!! Only one point to make. Andrea was so scared of pregnancy. Yet she shoved two fingers covered with Benji's spunk into her pussy. That's a 50-50 chance of getting her pregnant. And that would be a colored baby.

This was a good story but it ended unfinished. What happened when Andrea got home? Did she divorce her husband? Did she move in with Skye and fuck Skye’s brother occasionally? What happened to her children? Too many unanswered questions. Five stars for the story!!!

More thoughts on this story. I would have thought that if Andrea was my wife, she would not just accept the story from a stranger, Skye, about me cheating with another woman without seeing the proof. In this story, she just accepted the accusations of Skye and had a sexual affair with her. She cheated on her husband without seeing any proof of his infidelity. Why? She was a happily married woman with lovely children whom she loved and she was ready to throw this all away based on accusations from a woman who she did not know. Yes, she was exposed to lesbian love and realized that it fulfilled her in ways that she did not understand but she also realized that she needed cock - but not the cock of her husband who she claimed she loved. She would accept the cock of Skye's brother instead. What a truly shallow person Andrea has become all of a sudden. This makes no sense. How can she so easily flip from a loving and faithful wife and loving mother to a shallow, callous personage who needed cock from any man, even the brother of a stranger to satisfy her sexual needs. That makes no sense and leaves me with the conclusion that not only does the story not answer all of the questions i have as an unfinished story. I makes me see that the story does not hold together in the end. She should have seen the proof of her husband's infidelity before cheating on him and she should have confronted him with this evidence and found out why he cheated on her before going off and fucking Skye and Skye's brother. Perhaps her husband could have accepted Andrea's new-found bi-sexuality and worked with her. The story just does not hold together in the final analysis.. The story just does not hold together in the final analysis. Maybe, just maybe, the proof of her husband’s infidelity was fabricated by Skye to get what she wants and her husband did not cheat on her with the church secretary or any other woman.