All Comments on 'April's New Curves'

by ReginaFilangie

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good

Very good and make me wet

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 7 years ago
Beautiful love story

Love how April wakes up to spring day and new life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I enjoyed it. It made me wet. I'd love to see more chapters. maybe the brother walks in and finds them and joins in. or she gets pregnant. anyways. good story. (:

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uabout 7 years ago
awesome

made my cock throb at the thought of filling her cunt

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsabout 7 years ago
good job

Good story . Hope you do more .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More chapters coming?

Her innocence is so sexy! Can't wait to read more.

sleazettesleazetteabout 7 years ago

It was so hot. Write more like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This story was so hot. It turned me on, please write more like this.

💦🍆

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Job!!!

I really enjoyed this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

THAT WAS HOTT!!! PLS. WRITE MORE!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
"It's called fucking."

I bet she never knew that. (Rolls eyes)

Your story is a little juvenile and somewhat of an insult to the intelligence of adult readers, not sure about the others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This was really good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nothing to be nervous about

You did a grand job. would like to see more chapters or more stories from you in this genre. Daddy/Daughter-Prom and Daddy/Daughter-Wedding are my favorite types of stories in this genre (just in case you need an idea of what to write next)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I was slightly disappointed that her brother didn't make an appearance as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Yummy!

This made me soo wet! Delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

I loved this story xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
nice work

My favorite line was when she was speaking in tongues. That was a first.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good story!

Very well written and a GOOD story!Bravo sweet girl.Hope you write a sequel as well connecting with April's Bro

BigBadJake40BigBadJake40about 7 years ago
Well written and very hot and Erotic.

I find it hard to believe, that this is a first Incest story, it was soo welk done,

Felt so natural and the flow of words, just carried me along.

If this was meant to arouse, it certainly succeeded.

My only disappointment, was when the story ended, and I was left wanting more,

definitely a great first start. Cant wait to see your next submission, and i am hoping, there will be more, Congratulations on a job well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent!

That was so sexy and erotic, in a way that's just a little too rare in my opinion. Well done! More, please! Haha

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent - Now we need more!

Well written, will enjoy chapter 2....hope you add elements of D/s into next chapters....there was the beginigs of it. Keep going....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So. Rape then.

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