by ReginaFilangie
I enjoyed it. It made me wet. I'd love to see more chapters. maybe the brother walks in and finds them and joins in. or she gets pregnant. anyways. good story. (:
This story was so hot. It turned me on, please write more like this.
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I bet she never knew that. (Rolls eyes)
Your story is a little juvenile and somewhat of an insult to the intelligence of adult readers, not sure about the others.
You did a grand job. would like to see more chapters or more stories from you in this genre. Daddy/Daughter-Prom and Daddy/Daughter-Wedding are my favorite types of stories in this genre (just in case you need an idea of what to write next)
I was slightly disappointed that her brother didn't make an appearance as well.
My favorite line was when she was speaking in tongues. That was a first.
Very well written and a GOOD story!Bravo sweet girl.Hope you write a sequel as well connecting with April's Bro
I find it hard to believe, that this is a first Incest story, it was soo welk done,
Felt so natural and the flow of words, just carried me along.
If this was meant to arouse, it certainly succeeded.
My only disappointment, was when the story ended, and I was left wanting more,
definitely a great first start. Cant wait to see your next submission, and i am hoping, there will be more, Congratulations on a job well done.
That was so sexy and erotic, in a way that's just a little too rare in my opinion. Well done! More, please! Haha
Well written, will enjoy chapter 2....hope you add elements of D/s into next chapters....there was the beginigs of it. Keep going....