All Comments on 'Armadillo Crossing'

Thank you for reposting it. 5 stars.

Kept it from being perfect. It doesn't make sense that Logan would get jail time for defending himself. The police knew that he didn't start it and you didn't tell us anything worth seven years to a guy who had enough money for a good legal defense.

Everything else was a very enjoyable read. You are special.

R.

Such a prolific writer.*****

Thanks for re-posting this,it's always been one of my favourite stories. Cheers Malcolm

I love the humanity of your characters so much. They feel real. You carefully craft them and make the reader care for them. Love it. Thanks for sharing.

Randy, from the bottom of my heart I thank you for posting this one! I will never quite understand why it resonated with me so much when you first published it and maybe even more so now but I will always appreciate it and rate it a 5* no matter what. And I still stand by my statement that this is the best one you ever put out, even though all of your stories are super all the time, but this one does hold a special place in my heart.

So once more thank you for resubmitting it when I needed it most!

Great story

Thanks for re-submitting your older stories. I didn't know this one, but I'm glad I do now.

Thank you, it was a pleasure to read.

when I read this story before. I live and play in the panhandle of Florida and Mobile/Gulf Shores area. I love old and new muscle cars. I have several that I take to shows. I love 80% of your stories that I have read. there are a couple that I didn't agree with the perspective or topic but everyone of them are extremely well written and very good reads. You should be proud of your work as it is quite good. Anytime I see a new post with your name on it I immediately click on it to read it. Thanks for making a return so that we can enjoy your writings again. Have a great day!

Thank you for reading. The typical prison term for aggravated assault in Florida is five years, combine that with battery, conspiracy to commit assault and battery and a possible domestic violence charge, seven years is about right, I believe. I did consult with my Aunt, who is an attorney and has been a prosecutor. Logan did not receive jail time in the story. He was arrested at the scene of a fight, as is usually the case, then when the police learned the facts, he was released.

So, I did, indeed, tell you something worth seven years, no matter the legal defense. Conspiracy to commit crimes receives the same punishment as the actual commission of those crimes. Thanks to everyone who read and was so kind. Randi.

Thanks for posting this one here!

It should be a made for TV movie, or perhaps the reason I could see the story was due to the powerful and evocative writing?

Mind you, always good to see an author do well. Sixth book, eh? Lucky Logan. He married well.

You do so much for this site and are so talented I just don't know how to react.

Except to say a very deep felt thank you for all you do.

This site would only be half as good if it weren't for your efforts.

Ok, so I'm a big fan, and thank you.

Of course 5* & 😊😍😊🤩😊

.....what FirstwithU said !!

a good day when I check my favorites on Lit and see your name come up. Kind of running out of superlatives. Great story, well written.

you are one of the best on this site please talk Stangstar06 into posting again on this site please I know you can do it

Please talk Stang into retiring permanently! Tell him to take the chunky first wife and the big titted younger second wife with him and his car. 5 *s and 😐😐😐😐!

AMerryman

This story reads just as delightfully the second time around as it did when I read it "over there." Lit readers who are new to your work will get to enjoy your older stories as you repost them here. Keep 'em coming!

I love these old-new stories. I’m thrilled you’re resubmitting them. Much thanks.

Randi has is a romantic at heart. This was just a lot of fun to read and I felt good by the end. I like that feeling! Thanks for another great story!

but this should have been caught, "She was not a stimulating auditor"

Yes, you got me again. I always love the way your story line flows. Your readers are never confused about the story or its characters. You are a great story teller. I only wondered about where he played college football and what his major was. Oh well. That is only me. 5*

Thank you for sharing your art with all of us.

"Three days before Logan and Sydney were married, he was sentenced to seven years in prison" - I think this sentence was the source of the Anonymous "Just one little thing....." comment. It reads as if the "he" refers to Logan, not Roland. My apologies for not picking up on it when I read it originally. My only excuse was that I was enjoying the story too much to pay close enough attention!

I'm gonna use the same excuse for missing the "stimulating auditor"!

This was the very first BR'58 story I ever read .

I actually read it on SOL because I only read in LW on Lit in those days . ( still mostly do )

But it was such a wonderful story , I immediately started reading more of your posts !

I'm so glad that you're bringing back the classics here , I hope that more readers can discover what I have known for a long time !

I simply adore that line about southern belle and southern comfort. Nice.

Cute story, but it seemed to move too fast. New favorite line is about a southern belle now; we’ll done.

It has all a little love ok more then a little ,a little crime and a good laugh.

See you by the next story.

Love your story’s but it’s SRT8 not RST8 a couple of your stories were this way and if you really want a great Mopar go for the 68-69 barracuda super stock most weren’t even street legal and got banned from lots of drag tracks for being to fast keep writing

This was a fantastic story and as always you did a great job telling it.

A good story extremely well written. And all the loose ends tied up nice and neat. What more can you ask for?

I can say . Other than my admiration and appreciation of your storys.

I don't know what else to say . Thanks for the great entertainment.

Oh well, the next story on the list is screaming my name.

blackknight

Excellent story, Very well written and interesting story line.

One of your stories I have to wonder how much of it is autobiographical. I don't think I really want to know, just leave an old, white man with his fantasies. Signed: BTW

Please give us more!!!!

There has to be more to this story. Sometimes a story is so good and, sinfully so, condensed so much it just has to spread out more and continued. This is one of those stories. PLEASE!!!

I like your style.

CvKH4v

however, to @artful codger: ¨greatly enjoy your work

but this should have been caught¨, "She was not a stimulating auditor".

it is obvious that @artful codger is lacking in the origin of words department.

¨auditor" means LISTENER. i bet he/she doesn´t know what ´decimate´ really means, either.

randi, thank you for writing!

This author writes some of the stories have enjoyed the most on this site. This is a good example. Bravos.

A wonderful story that blossoms at its own comfortable pace. Thoroughly enjoyable. THANKS.

You're an ace. I love the romance stories you write. I'm off to find another now.

Randi, I came across your stories and have been blown away by the consistent high quality of your writing, and the superb editing so that the stories flow without the interruptions and diversions of the atrocious spelling and grammatical errors found in so many of the stories I have read on this type of website.

I've been going through your stories mostly in alphabetical order and have yet to come across one that does not move me in some way, whether it be tears or erections and sometimes both.

I realize I am writing anonymously but I want to assure I'm not a troll, but a senior (60+) who has been an avid reader all my life, and therefore appreciate your attention to the smooth grammatical flow of your captivating and arousing stories.

DaveyG...

Un-freaking believable I felt like I was there thank you!

Randi, your stories remind me of the old boxes of Cracker Jacks - there is a prize in every box! Thank you for your tales.

somewhere east of Omaha

Bravo Randi! Another great story. Will make sure I will stop for all armadillo from now on 😜

Absolutely wonderful story

You know why the chicken crossed the road?

To prove to the armadillo it could be done

I adore the way you write.

Another great story! Thanks

Tis is a lovely story, sweet and loving. Thanks and please write more in this genre.

Soo, I've read this story for the third? fourth? time...

It still feels like hot chocolate on a cold winter night...

great story . . . . great writer . . . . second time . . . . still a five!

somewhere east of Omaha

Sweet story, great writing. Five stars.

Great story! *****

Was the 4th book about a psycho, stalker lawyer?

This is still an exceptional story and a nice read.

loved it!

Can’t believe it took me this long to discover such an awesome author. Looking forward to read more.

Randi, You’re the bomb!

Awesome.

Usually My comments are not very productive and I try not to make them, but once in a while I find necessary to express my support

That is the case here

Like I said awesome

Another lovely story.

Just such a lovely story

Brandi, U r an amazing writer and make your characters come to life for me. Keep up the same style and themes. I love reading your stories.

good story BUT 27 yrs. old, his own company, beautiful house, etc. etc. Really?

Great story, especially with the nice ending. The "magic trick" reminded me of of the time my wife did it while driving. She handed it over to me, expecting me to put it in her purse. Instead, I leaned half way out my window and hung it on the radio antenna. My left arm was sore for a week, but it was worth it hearing car horns all the way home.

Enjoyed the story, well written

DG

Excellent! Loved the ending.

Jim

Great love story! Thanks.

Dirtyoldbiman, I had a contractor do a job for me. He was 24 years old and ran his own excavation company. He built a semi as his High school graduation project. He owns and operates backhoes, semi trucks for hauling, and on my place, used his huge D8 Cat excavator to pull out and haul away a 19,9080 lb sycamore stump for me. It is possible for young people with the drive and skill to do great things. Logan was completely believable to me.

Blackrandl1958, great romantic story ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️!

Thank you! Loved the story, pace, and the emotion. Great job!

3th read, and still LOVE it! I am kinda like logan; 6'7", blond/reddish and 340, so i could totally relate to him/this...

Charming love story. Great hook with the armadillo. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I love that you write stories about people, who albeit are different, but incredibly relatable. KUDOS!

Love it!! Great read, first time, and I'm sure it will be next time, also. Thank you!!

Good ,enjoyable story.

Great story, characters and romance. The sex ain't too bad either! 😋

Love your stories. I normally read LW, but after reading your story Catch of a Lifetime I've been reading your romance ones. Super story line nice pace and believable characters. I thought the ending seemed rushed but still an amazing entertaining story. High rating from me. Thanks for sharing. I'm planning to read your other romance stories. Thanks John.

Went back and reread the ending from where she meets Logan’s family. Intriguing story. I just want more of them. I realize it’s been 5 years since you published this story, but I’d love more. Sydney’s relationship and interaction with Logan’s sisters is one area - they were her bridesmaids must be an interesting story; couple of times this story mentions the three of them planning to get together I’m intrigued; and they will become aunts how does that go? April the PI how did the dinner go; what did they discuss and/or decide; did Sydney ever call in the chip if so to do what; and lastly did she get enveloped in the Sydney-Logan world? Julie/Jules is another interesting character I’d like I know more about. There most be quite a back story on Logan’s attorney Audra.

I am not a creative writer and I am in awe of those who can captivate and enrich my imagination with words as you do. I surmise from what others say the story must speak to - beckon you to produce the words to bring it to life as you and other brilliant writers do. I just hope one day this story again entices you to share more.

Thanks for giving me joy while I walk with your characters. John.

What a nice story. Once I started reading I couldn't put it down. I hope all your stories are as great. Five stars.

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Anudder Winnah!

I absolutely love your writing style!

11/10 Armadillo!!!!!

5⭐️ awesome and amazing story

Simply wonderful,10 stars! Sydney finally got a family, and a husband that caused a name change- MOMMY!

3th read, still 10stars...

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