All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 12'

Good story!

5

Just came across this, what a gift :) Nicely written and a very interesting concept.

Thank you for continuing this story. This story along with a few others have been inspiration to start work on my own story. Please keep this story going.

Touching (pun intended). Please keep it going. 5 stars

A god dammed amazing story I’m so so happy you decided to give it it’s real ending unless there’s more lol.

Wow, this is an amazing and emotional turn to the story. Great work.

Thank You for finishing this story.

Thank You for finishing this story. I thought you brought it to an excellent conclusion if you take it no farther than this chapter. You tied up the loose ends to give us a happy ending, knowing he has direction and purpose in his life. I have been reading on another story site (an enormously long story) and came back to see what I missed during those weeks.

It had been awhile since you had written anything else on this story, so I re-read the story to get my perspective back on what was happening ( last couple of pages of the last chapter you had written couldn’t get my memory back on the characters).

This was a very rewarding story and you had a good explanation to conclude this chapter.

Thank you for writing!

A great story with a nice ending. A few loose threads but that’s on too. But if I NEVER read the terms “sexy udders” or “mushroom head” again it will be too soon.

Great story, needs proofreading again but 5*

Nice ending.

How many children has he now got?

Please,please,please finish this story.

Please, please, please do NOT add another word!!! You have reached that magical place of resonance where the plot themes, character development and emotional validity are balanced. You were true to the possibilities laid out in the opening hospital scene. The device to get Scott out of an unending lifetime orgy was brilliant. It solidified the characters and the Scott/Lilly connection was such a creative way to find resolution. We, the readers, are empowered to imagine our own ending. That is your gift to us. TELLING us would be painting a mustache on the Mona Lisa.

Nice story' thanks

Whoa! Great story with a unique premise. I really enjoyed the story!

Thanks

I read all of these I really liked them. Good righting.

Such an original concept and plot. Part mind control, part kink exploration, part mystery, and a soupcon of spirituality. Thoroughly entertaining and an ending that leaves the reader to go where they want. Thanks for writing and sharing.

What a great way to have a MC story with the main character not really able to control it (till the end), not trying to abuse his power and as much of a victim of it as the women he had sex with.

As noted by another commenter some variety in the sex description (did someone say “mushroom head”?) would have made it even better

It left me wondering two things, what happened to Jen and did Naomi have Scott’s child, but better that I’m left wondering than you write another chapter - the way you have ended the story is perfect.