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thorbenschmitzthorbenschmitzover 9 years ago
Another great work of yours

I really love your preference for sitter´s stories!! Thanks for all of your good work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Have a fetish for babysitters?

This was the same repetitive drivel that this author cranks out endlessly. Can you say BORING?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not bad

I like the ideas of your stories. Good basics. Needs a little more detail of passion and emotions going on with characters. I had to use my imagination a bit for the lacking details. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Mick? Mike?

i notice that "Mick" turns into "Mike."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
and then back into Mick

and then back into "Mick."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Maybe a tad slower

The story somehow rushed to it's ending... That feeling didn't build up right... And oh boy! Mick changed to Mike at 1500 hours :/

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