All Comments on 'Balancing the Books Pt. 02'

This author is very good, both in creating a story that makes you think and in writing very clever dialogue full of puns. This story in particular is very well written and (imho) tells a fascinating story, following this idea of 'balancing the books' (although difficult in real life).

He is one of my favourite authors and I think he deserves a lot of credit for his writing skills.

That is why I would like to point out a few typos: 'hin' instead of 'him', 'fhe' instead of 'the'.

But I repeat, he is a very talented writer and that is why I urge him to improve. Sometimes a text only needs a proof reading

That was tidied away nicely. Glad its a happy ending for all the guys.

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Ruined orgasm was a great touch! I was hoping that he'd get more orgasm debt after the party, but this end was just as good.