All Comments on 'Bears'

Apparently even to the author, who switched them at least once.

most of the time they pick their family over the husband

fun and not at all predictable with interesting characters, thanks for sharing

One thing I note is that often sisters, and also brothers, will have similar names. So doing that is actually more true to life than not, thus like many who write, I do tend that way.

But switching names during the text? I swear, I ran this one through the keyboard a half dozen times, and still missed it?

*Must be getting old here, oh well. Just having fun anyway.

I will keep trying.

MGM

Uncommon twist. Well-written.

said it all ... "Much ado about nothing".

This would have went differently if the wife had not used her brain. My wife has a cousin like this, never satisfied with anything or anybody. I am sure we all know one.

Quite different, and very enjoyable. An interesting way to get rid of an annoying sis-in-law.

I liked that Sara kicked Sally's ass. She sure knew how to protect what was hers. A true loving wife. Thanks. Paul

But camping with a pain in the ass can be a nightmare! Thankfully, reading about it isn't nearly as painful. In fact this was a fun read.

Thanks

I want to go camping!!!!!!!

Good read, light and original. Thanks for writing.

Great story even though it revolved around a PITA!

There are lots of stories in this category involving cheating wives. Husband comes home, finds wife in bed with a stranger or her boss or a best friend of husband and then after comes the revenge thing. Always, the same thing. But this is different. Something new. Something refreshing. A loving wife story in a true sense. I really enjoyed reading it. Hope you will write more of this kind.

Different from the stories i have read so far and all the more better. This one i liked a lot. Short and funny. I loved the fact that Sara believed in her husband and loved him to the point of fighting with her sister over him. She didnt go ballistic on hearing about what her sister tried to do like in most of the other stories.

4 stars for this one. Write more short and fun reads like this one. These are mood lifters after reading so many of the depressing stories here.

What a great different LW story!

Okay but not one of my favorites.

The story kinda rolled along. Not bad, but I guess I was expecting something other than what I read. Although, I'm not sure what. Yet, it retained my interest to the end. And the writing is good.

Yep he just an asshole -

A loyal, loving, dedicated asshole - good for him and for Sara.

Nicely done and better than what I thought was going to be the outcome -

With Sprinkles. Thanks once more foe sharing

Other side, other foot!

Great tale! Thx!

Nicely written. My two quibbles would be for: 1) his Jeep to NOT have an electric winch installed - critical for wilderness roving (or, at least, a 5 or 10 ton manual winch, and: 2) him to go into the wild with an empty tank and no 10 gallon jerry-can full of gas!

Hard to imagine that Sweetie would think he cheated on her ... She knew how out-of-it he was during that period! Actually, also hard to believe Sis would be that skanky in that critical situation, where they were highly dependent on him regaining full functioning for their survival! Liked the way Sweetie seems to have solved the problem. It also seems that Sis benefited from having to perform under harrowing threat. (No, not having to tame the trouser snake, presumably already competent in that thicket!)

Left out 'partially' on 'empty tank'. - it was 1/2 full during camping! FILL and have reserve before going into the wild!

Apologies for not reviewing carefully. It is a pet peeve whether I am guilty or others!

a wife fighting for her man that is great loved it and she believed him awesome

Nice story, thanks.

I love it...5* from me.

badly prepared to go wild camping.....glad his wife sorted her bitch of a sister out.....

A good or bad blow job, could be false. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for writing. tom anon

P.S. Got Sally's phone number? I'll tame that bitch!

Thanks for the effort.

What was that?

Damn. I'm an Eagles fan anyway.

But the ending was logical. Good story!

No real cheating...one loving wife...5 stars.

Well written and fun read.

Of course it was the wife's job

to put her sister in her place.

Took her sweet time finding that out.

But then, if she'd acted sooner,the story

would've been too short, lol.

Top ratings from me.

Very good story. Sally was a piece of work. Glad Sarah was able to sort her out.

I had a wife whose sex drive evaporated three minutes after the ink dried on our marriage license. Fortunately, her younger sister fell deeply in love with my tongue and my cock. I moved her into our apt. and bed. I told my wife that she could leave anytime she wanted to but her sister was taking her place. I was married to the wrong sister but I fucked three kids into the right one. The wrong one finally moved out and filed for divorce. I married her sister and, eight months later, was one of three winners of the seventy three million dollar State Lottery. I sent my ex-wife a sympathy card and got my wife pregnant again.

Gave the story three stars. It was an alright read.

I get it's just a story, but why would you have Dan, or Sara for that matter, have the little bitch over so much? Sally and Sara didn't really care for each other and all Sally was doing was to drive a wedge between Dan and Sara. I thought maybe their parents were dead and Dan/Sara were raising her. Only flaw I noticed. Nice to read a story with no spelling or punctuation errors. Great read

Good wife

Good story. Why do good wives always seem to have a bitch sister?

Sara is a winner of a wife. How did it feel to have women fight over you?

No offense but Sara should have put her foot up her sisters ass a long time ago. Also i kept mixing up the characters Sara and Sally. I know they were sisters but the names were too similar.

The story was well-written and the characterization was good, especially the female characters. All-in-all, however, not much really happened; the plot was bland. The story, while stylistically good, didn't actually engage my interest. I cannot, however, give less than four stars because it was so well written.

Good story and I'm glad that the wife (Sara) kicked her sister's (Sally) ass finally. Yeah, kind of hard at times remembering which was which. Liked the ending so I guess having to put up with her (Sally) on the trip worked out in the end, lol.

Story was a 4-star to me - but I must have had the pick of the litter because bluntly put, my cum would have curdled if my sister-in-laws had gone after me