by sethp
...then it's probably fantasy. Is it rape if she never says, "No", doesn't fight to stop it, doesn't do anything to keep it from continuing? At least it was well written.
From your note at teh beginning, you say you wrote this story for Becca. So I gues she wanted this type of story. Like the other person said if she was forced its rape. The part where he bites her lip til she bleeds then he bites her nipples was icky to read!! The dad is a pig. Plus hes a black out drunk! I wouldn't wish that on my enimy - hope the girl gets otu soon poor thing.
was noncon/reluctance, true, but it was also incest, so it automatically goes into the incest category. And it's a "story", people, written for someone that wanted that type of story. It was well-written and I really liked it. Nice job, Sethp.
Father/daughter stuff isn't my thing, but I actually liked this one, and the wierd rough biting/bleeding element worked for me. Well played, sir.
It should have been longer, or at the very least a part 2. But w/e, good job!
Not bad, sethp, but the lead up to the initial rape scene in bed is a little dull and cliche. Also, crediting yourself in your own story? Humorous.
DJade
Something is missing in this nice story. The sex continued to happen and yet the daughter made no protest - in fact she accepted the incestuous acts without speaking of them with her father. Great little tale but somehow there was no tie between the wife and daughter. Where was the mother-wife?
Really fucking hot. Hope the little slut learns her job is just making her daddy's cock happy from now on. Would love this to continue!
just plain RAPE as Becca had unwilling
sex with her drunken father. Best thing
to happen to his daughter, she would
become pregnant with her daddy's child.
She should have gone to the hospital/ police that morning. Instead she chose to be a slut.
Rape is what he did & deserved nothing!
Bill S.