All Comments on 'Becoming a Slut Wife: Charlotte'

Good luck

I think endings can be difficult and JPB has an effective solution -- just don't write one.

I refuse to wish you luck as you are into total betrayal.

Okay Bob, is this to make up for the other stories that I couldn't write a sequel to?

Hmmm, wish me luck!

Amanda

Well done, a very explicit story of a real slut. Perhaps she will get all of the cock she wants and still keep her husband in the dark about her cheating. I think eventually her pussy will show the signs of all of the wear and tear she has from fucking so much.

Thanks for the read

I'm shaking my head at how JPB manages to have his literary cake & eat it too. This character condems amorality in theory, but lives hedonistically. No smutty, slutty detail is missed. At the end , the cheeky cow asks us, the readers, to wish her luck in furthering her deceptions- no lack of chuptzah here !

It's hilarious & spooky as one. A typical melange of disconcerting emotions that is but one of this author's stock skills in trade to evoke in a reader struggling gamely & shamefully to follow his mixed messages.

Even an idiot knows the difference between a woman that's ready to have sex and one that's just douched and ready to have sex. You don't think there is a difference? She's toast when Steve asks her why she needed to douche.

When does RAPE equate love? JPB has hit an all time low (sorry to say)

slut!

wife!

I hate and detest stories that make rape turn into an insatiable slut. A woman enjoying the unbelievable pain of anal sex is as believable as a man being sodomized having an orgasm. Only happens in poorly written erotic fiction.

One of your many misses. Totally misses, like your ir stories.

What a bunch of hypocrites.

The gang of five go out to help Elsa celebrate blow off steam after getting rid of hubby FOR CHEATING.

Then they (minus the two that wised up) spend the rest of the night CHEATING.

Maybe Elsa could be excused, since she's now divorced.

Except that she's the one who invited the two guys who brought their friends, thus playing a major role in getting it all started (how did a woman who so "righteously" kicked out her husband, just happen to have such slutty, agessively pushy male "friends"?).

Furthermore, Elsa was an accessory to the crime, both by doing nothing in the car to dissuade her one friend from adultery, plus providing both her friends an alibi and agreeing to lie for them.

Makes me wonder if Elsa's husband got tired of his slutty wife, and was trying to even the score with a revenge fuck when he got caught.

Of course, we'd need more backstory to know the true situation.

And Katie and Terri (the two that wised up) will likely be in cahoots with the three villians, ready to protect them with deception as needed.

I hope JPB has provided us with a Literotica fantasy,

rather than a slice of reality.

Paul in Oklahoma

Hey, Charlotte. I wish you luck with all my power! 5* ~~ JBE

Just Plain Stupid.

And he has to tie a 2x4 on his ass so he doesn't fall in.

Thanks for your writing.