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A very promising beginning! Please keep writing!

Paint the outside of their house? Don't be a moron. He walked back in, got his clothes and headed out the door. What are they going to do? Beat him up? And if they do, he KNOWS where he is! He's seen the outside of the house and the neighbor, including the address. So this whole idea doesn't work. If he's really pissed, the first woman that sits on his face gets a piece of her vagina bitten off. Then they have the choice of calling 911 to save her from bleeding to death or letting her die then killing him. You don't think his family might look for him? That people didn't see her leave with him from the bar? You didn't think this mess through. And one other thing. Even a professional painter wouldn't have been able to paint a Victorian era house in one week all by himself. Dumb.

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