All Comments on 'Beth's Awakening'

I for one would like to see how they get Dad inside of Beth. Would he feel a difference? Would Beth be able to keep quiet enough so that he doesn't recognize her voice? Will she like the new feeling of cum filling her?

Excellent

Great story, had me rivetted all the way through with a final inevitable conclusion ! Can't wait to read about Dad's lesson to her. Kev

Great story please write the next part soon

Felt like it was an actual event........some cultures use this to enable their children to prepare.

Will there ever be a part 2 cuz it was hot as hell

Loved it! Can't wait until dad gets in on it!! Five stars and a favorite point!

oh you naughty author you!...keep them cumming :)

Too bad there isn't an older brother to help out.

Great writting...not that I should critize....stopped reading after page three. I believe you played the daughter to innocent to long...after sex with mom and still the no clue innocent girl needing moms advice I lost interest. Also an orgasm with just a tingue...ask for advice from woman readers.

but your writting is great, just a bit over on the story line, but so am I

Great story writing. More please

Daddy needs to fill Beth's pussy with his seed.