All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 29'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

boring

NirosuNirosualmost 2 years ago

It feels like Mark has taken a backseat in being like active. And for awhile now kind of completely lost the unassuming element that he enjoyed at the start.

Along with Elsa continually screws up her own rules.

I'm still hoping for some sort of tension or drama or like some driving element beyond orgy with whomever new person shows up, primarily man who then tags a woman as an adage later sorta

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...