All Comments on 'Birthday Boy'

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Interesting that the story is about the anticipation and public shame, rather than the main event it sets up. I think it's a lot of fun, showing the way his sister plays with his head, and you can always write up the rest if you feel in the mood.

I love this story. It was the perfect length, it had great storytelling and visualization, and it ended on a suspenseful note (very nice touch)!

Of course, you already know how I feel about it. If you ever have the desire to continue this, I would be very happy to read about Zack's experience at the birthday party.

Good story! I'd love to read more.

Good writing and editing. It’s interesting how everyone seems to treat Zack’s situation in a very matter-of-fact way. Please write more (and stay safe!) If you end up selling works, let us know.

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Maybe try another of my stories.

Thanks! Yeah, while I like the idea of the party and someday I'll probably get to that and maybe more, this one is sorta 'it's more than the destination, it's the journey' take within a femdom setting. I like the anticipation as well as the final hand-off.

Thanks! I'm quite happy with it.

I'm sure at some point we'll get back into this one, but as you also know, I have a lot of loose ends already that I need to be working on. But someday I'm sure we'll learn more of Zack's adventures.

Thanks! As mentioned in other comments, I'm sure there will be more someday. However it won't likely be anytime soon. Too many other stories I need to be working on. You can check my bio page for updates (roughly once a month).

Thanks! Yes, Zack lives in a very interesting neighborhood. I am trying to write more and have a lot I'm trying to accomplish through the rest of the year. I do have a few stories available on Amazon but I need to get better covers made for them. So much to do. Hopefully someday I can get some income from stories which will allow me time to write more. Fingers crossed.

You have outdone yourself! A perfectly composed nuanced vignette that captures the submissive mind perfectly!

I am still SHIVERING with the horror of it all...

Kisses to you...

Gorgeous! Lovely! Such a generous girl to lend her puppy to a young woman's birthday celebration.

Thanks! I rather enjoyed this one. I'm glad you've enjoyed it as well.

Thanks! Yes, Charlotte is very giving. She is glad to help out by lending Zack. The women in the neighborhood are all so positive and warm. Surely Zack should realize how lucky he is to have a sister like Charlotte.

A story seemingly written by the insane, about the insane, for the insane! Is there more to say? No!!!

100% of the time I know this not how society should see people, and yet with a when you start adding a higher degree of accuracy then it reveals that 0.000001% that I would love to feel how Zack is feeling.

Utterly pathetic nonsense.

Love the story! Please go on with it!

Anonymous so just not a story for you

You write such great fantasies! Thanks for sharing.