All Comments on 'Blind Draw'

Deserved much higher than the measly 100 as you continue the march to Story Teller Supreme. Silly?

I think not as one of many that you aroused and entertained in a lifelike manner that was possible and moving.

It takes more than talent to reach your level among the best and I have watched your credibility grow as you walked the path diligently, with respect and consequence in some shape.

KUDO's Author - another at interval please.

With Very High Regard

wasnt there a similar story that got posted here a few days ago?

A second chance for both of them. Great job!

I can not say in words how happy that I am with the fact you didn't take her to Walmart or own the state of Colorado.

Thanx Jack

...has been mentioned in the Story Review thread found in the Author's Hangout in the Literotica Forums.

Lizzy

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I enjoyed this story very much.

Boyd

what more can I say

Very sweet and heartfelt. It certainly tucks at the heartstring. There is hope for blind people after all.

Only thing I dislike about the story is the long exclamation. I find that unnecessary. You might want to tone it down. Overall it was a great job well done.

beautifully done.

thank you.

A compassionate story with true feelings of love emblazzened through it.

Congratulations on a sensitive and humane story.

story. I loved every word.Bravo.

Avery beautiful and great story. Thank you .

Liked it when I first read it and I still do. Thanks, jack.

Beautiful story coupled with great writing. Thanks for a wonderful read.

Very touching and true to life. It's amazing what tender loving care can do for a person. I just wish there was more of it in the world. Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Merry Christmas Jack

One of first tales that I have read that was not about characters but about character.

your stories touch the heart - I hope you never quit writing - thank you for sharing

this is a great story. it's carries hope & has a good amount of development for a short story and still has some great sex scenes.

The story was inspiring in the hope that past mistakes can be overcome with the new child. I liked the fact that the blind woman can now take care of herself due to his encouragement and that they are a team at work. Well done.

A story that actually has a loving wife and some one to love her. Thank you so much. The ugliness did not win. I'm about to cry at finding such a story amongst all the mean, nasty and twisted things trying to pass for stories.

Completly unexpected.

This is the best one I have read in the 6 years I have been in here .

Thanks

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One word.... Beautiful

I really enjoyed this story.

I really enjoyed this story immensely, 5 stars⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Well written. One of the best I have read on this site. 5 stars!

VERY GOOD ENJOYED THE STORY TO BAD THE EX HUSBAN DID NOT GET HIS ASS KICKED AND HIS BALLS SHOVED UP HIS ASS.

Good play. 5*

5 stars in my book, as well. Wonderful, uplifting story. Keep'em coming, please.

The characters need more depth, and the loose ends were tied up in a trite way, BUT the plotting was excellent and a welcome relief from the nauseating "wife sharing" stories seen on LW. This one should have been much longer. I'm giving you a 5 for creativity.

This little tale shows more creativity than all but 2 or 3 percent of LW stories. I can do without all the long sex scenes (the first one fit the story-line), but that's a personal preference.

Another good story. I enjoy your writing.

Just pure and simply DAMN GOOD.

Totally terrific story!

This was so amazing and something that brought tears to my eyes.

Wow. A superb story, truly a great twist in the Loving Wives category!

10 *s!

Beautiful story! Did need to contact her father to let him know she was alive and alright.

A wonderful twist, thank you for it!

Very nice story. I was kinda hoping “Dick” would locate Judy and come to drag her back to his place. And that Cal would beat the cowboy shit out of him and send him packing. Would have served the crazy SOB right.

5 stars, of course. Thanks, Jack.