by TxRad
What a very wonderful tale. I was overwhelmed by your characters. The story felt like it had been taken from something larger, something more whole. I would love to read more of your writings. Fare on.
This is the kind of story I love to read.So much of Riders comments are true. We who have sight are too blind to see.
Excellelnt story with great sensitivity and insight.
More people need to take a piece of advice from Rider's approach.
Being possessed by hate is profoundly counter productive.
definitely a keeper. Please do keep up the good work. I'd have put this in romance .. it is very powerful.
I loved it with a passion that suprised even me. You made their reunion and love something beautiful, just i like it. I praise you ability to see and then transfer it into a form that all of us can read, enjoy and apriciate.
Thankyou!!!
What a wonderful, beautiful, insightful story! It would be interesting to continue the thread of Linda and Rider. Please consider it. Keep up the great work!
I want you to keep up with this story. We need stories like this in our world now. Thank You it was excellent.
Really fantastic. Could be great stuff for a good film.
Please continue such stories
This is the very first time I've bothered to even comment on a story. It was absolutely wonderful... I did'nt want it to end..
I tip my hat to you sir; You have a rare gift; The ability to insert romance, love, and sex into a sultry story well told. It's not a stroke story, it is a love story pure and simple and you are a master of the art. You have reached into a couple's very souls to tell it and I'm honored to be allowed to read it. Thank You! Ronnie W.
This is the first time I have responded to a story. This is an excellent story, well written, sensitive, thought provoking and quite touching. You bring this website to a whole new level. Keep up the good writing.
This story is wonderful and it feels real. Beautiful character developement.
I've only just found your stories & am truly in awe of your talent. This was inspiring, moving & just generally terrific. I like finding stories showing that people with different abilities like romance & sex, too. Really liked the humor & realistic feel. Thanks for sharing your talent!! Keep writing, please!!
Without doubt the most passionate story I have read on this site. Beautiful.
I have read several of your stories, and I think this one could be a favorite. I tried to vote a 5 for it , but the vote wouldn't take on this or the last story I read. MIke
As a practicing psychic, it was magical to read a story that describes how the aura changes and we connect energetically to each other. And it was a beautifully written story as well. I'm glad I found you.
what a wonderful warm story, Thank you for sharing it. I totally enjoyed it
I've returned to read this story several times and I'm in awe at the depth of feelings I have every time in response to such outstanding writing. Maybe it's the element of blindness, I don't know but I genuinely feel like I'm a part of the story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
made a love connection for the universe, TK U MLJ LV NV
The frequent repeated errors in word choice (e.g., "to" where "too" should have been, "except" where "accept" should have been) were jarring in an otherwise excellent story.
I don't know what to say. That was a very nicely crafted story. Thank you. I think you could probably get more chapters out of it.
I felt every touch and emotion in this story. Just truly outstanding writing, character development, and drawing the reader in to their world. I am absolutely in awe of your talent. I was on page 2 and was scared it was going to end, I quickly scrolled down and saw that there was indeed another page and I can’t tell you what a wave of relief I felt!
FullBliss
That's a truly beautiful, and ultimately, very sexual story TxRad. Well done Sir.
It was a fun tale and then when going into the nitty gritty it exploded, Truly amazing quality.
I agree with FULLBLISS ... some stories take you up towards the top of the mountain and then leave you 100 feet from gaining the summit. This was well done indeed!
Totally unbelievable love story, and not just hard core sex. I felt like I was a part of the story. Best story I've ever read on Literotica.com and I can't wait to read others from you. Keep up the good work ..EXCELLENT.!!.
Love conquers all and illuminates it beautifully!
A very beautiful story! So well thought out and written with great characters and a great "insight" to true love. My only complaint is your use of 'to' when it should have been 'too', sorry, it's just a pet peeve of mine. Thank you and your Muse for sharing your vision and talents.