All Comments on 'Bobby and Abby's Amazing Adventure Ch. 05'

Not erotic not believable not readable, stupid story.

You are as prolific as you are inept at this writing thing.

Amazing adventure for whom? I agree with commenters on Ch. 04, Fantasy Football is much better. Abby just morphed into an evil slut. Bobby's actions merit this story going for the Gay Male category.

Stomach proof reading your own work. So you never do realize how bad they really are do you? You need to find an editor who has the compassion necessary to send them bach and tell you to stop wasting your time.

Caged cuckold. This is “hard” to read. Lol

Please continue

Still super cucky, if you’re into that sort of Femdom agitprop fantasy.

so good,had me hard all the way through,reading about your cuckold