All Comments on 'Brandi and Kelly Ch. 05'

wow. does this happen in real life?

This was crazy to read the stories about brandi and kelly. the author is very imaginative and is a good story teller and writer.

and we know the world is debased enough for this shit to probably happen in real life. it's scary.

I loved the first four parts of this story. I hope Brandi and Kelly will get out of this brainwashing without getting damaged. It would destroy this story for me. Please don't let us wait for the next chapter too long.

Very creative, very well written!

love the story, but seems to be rushing a bit now. the auction, for example, could have been a chapter all by itself. no matter, good tale.

Going too fast near the end of the chapter. Tell us more about Kelly and how she got into this. She can tell Brandi about it in their "free time." From what we have seen to far, it does not explain how Kelly is so completely taken.

Part of me wants to see them make it out ok, but a darker part of me wants to see them get broken in, as they're minds and freedoms are stripped from them piece by piece. Excellent story.

As the previous reviewer wrote: I hope they will come out undamaged.

But no darker part within me hopes they won't, and I will stop reading here if that happens.

For me the twist in part 5 doesn't fit well into the story line.

I liked the way Brandi was coming to know her submissive side.

Please keep up the good work either way. I'm waiting for the next part.

hard to read aas Mistrss and this one have recently dealt with slavers. They ae so evil

Out of the amateur lezzie frying pan and into the O M G professional slave trader fire! Really reaching for a line to get Brandi into the evil Thomas' s hands, not too believable for an adult to forgo the cops and try to play Robinhood. Just a suggestion, aren't some of John's cohorts on the force? Oh well, I guess there is Great scope for future developments with the amateur posse on the trail. Otherwise, an unusually good narrative.

I am torn between hoping Brandi survives intact and wishing to see her crumbling under Thomas' s assault on her psychic. I'm sure it will be painfully filled with limb juttering cums howrver it goes, and I find that I can stand That with great fortitude.

DHL

Blackmail/manipulation non-concent coupled with human trafficking is a major issue for me. To close to the real evils of the world that give ds of bdsm a bad name. Honestly bullet to the head to those people is to kind.

Rest of the story is I dunno how to feel either way yet. Normally like concent/non-concent stories maybe the human trafficking is a bridge to far, or that Kevin is a pretty shitty Dom and not protecting his sub.