All Comments on 'Brian Pumper Loves Adina Jewel'

This story perfectly captures your style. After 2,600+ tries, you've done it. No need to ever write another thing on Literotica. You've followed your formula perfectly, starting with introducing your characters by first and last name in the first paragraph, right down to signing off with a stupid flippant remark. All the things you're known for are right here. Racism, sexism, lack of originality, you nailed it all.

Just end it right here, you're done.

Nice and sexy. Brian Pumper just loves assuming the position and being taken good and proper. And who can blame him, it feels so good!

Ignore the deplorable haters. And keep up the good work.

Kindred Spirit.

Your stories are garbage, and another bad writer telling you its good is no reason to ever write more. Quit now, every single person on Literotica will be happy.