All Comments on 'Bryan Gets a Makeover'

......these stories where "a strange little man" makes magical changes to some poor sod are a lot of fun. This one was especially sexy, in a fantastical sort of way.

Sadly, there were far too many technical issues blemishing the story to make it as enjoyable as it might have been.

This definitely needs a sequel !!!!!!!!

This would be better with a sequel, maybe even a prequel just to give it some flow. Also, one thing I would have put in is to have his ex and supposed best friend is that they retain memories of the past but not be able to speak about it nor do anything about it. Just left in misery from their betrayal. That for the rest of their days they would know they are being punished for having betrayed him in so vile a manner. Let them see how he had gotten upgraded and left them in his wake. Just my $0.02 here IMHO

dam I wish I was crystal or susan

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!

Love the Bryan and Crystal characters!!!! Susan needs her own chapter...

1 star just to vote

I can't wait for the next in this tale. Thanks

Awful writing no offence. None of the dialogue seems realistic, you should add pauses and writing in between quotes to add some more narration

Wasn't a bad read not the best but was still enjoyable a continuation of Bryan and crystals story would be fun.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!