All Comments on 'Bryan's Christmas Present'

Fruitcake: the biggest Zero you can imagine.

Bryan is my new hero

what a waste as if he is really going to just hang around wondering where she is then suddenly just happen to find the tape no way when she wasn't home and didn't awnser her phone he would have left to have fun by himself especially since you say she was pissy for awhile that alone would keep him away also IF YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE A SERIES EITHER KEEP THE TITLES THE SAME OR GIVE A LIST OF BACK STORIES AT THE BEGINING OF EACH STORY HOW DO YOU EXPECT READERS TO KNOW WHAT ORDER TO READ THEM IN IF YOU DON'T TELL THEM TYPICAL IDIOT WRITER FOR THIS SITE WHAT A WASTE OF SPACE please keep your stories realistic no girl is going to allow her lover to sleep around

So did Bryan ever make it to the hotel or does he get to enjoy Heather's friend at home first? Do tell.

Trying to find them and put them in order is a ruddy nightmare !

For heavens sake sort it out, or at least tell us at the end of the story which one is next or list it in an info box on the right hand side.